Your subline explains the technology in one go: an RNA-guided, nuclease enzyme-based approach to programmable cell depletion, starting with HPV-induced oropharyngeal cancer.
Below: the concept I built for you, and the six changes I'd make first. Most take days, not months.
The first three are the ones on your postcard. The rest come next.
The main headline reads "Specific Flexible Effective RNA-guided cell depletion", without punctuation.
I'd write "RNA-guided cell depletion: specific, flexible, effective."
The browser and share title says "A new class of cancer therapies", which appears nowhere on the page. The description says "versatile" where the page says "Flexible".
I'd align title, description and headline, so search results and the page tell one story.
The subline mentions "its G-dase® E payload" once, with no explanation.
I'd add one plain sentence on what G-dase® E does, since it is the heart of your platform.
The page promises "Up to single nucleotide specificity in differentiation of unwanted vs. healthy cells", with no reference.
I'd link that line to a publication or a data figure.
The page says "Potentially gamechanging therapeutic applications in many disease areas".
I'd write "game-changing", or better, name two disease areas you are looking at.
The footer shows "© Akribion Therapeutics GmbH" without a year, and "© Impreza Theme by UpSolution".
I'd remove the theme credit and add the year and your company address.
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I'll walk you through the concept and these six points. You keep both, either way.